The Look.

Feb. 1st, 2017 01:30 pm
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Title: The Look.
Author: pekeleke
Pairing(s): Severus Snape/Harry Potter
Challenge: Written for snarry_100 ( IJ, LJ, DW ) prompt challenge 561: Test.
Rating: G
Length: 100
Warnings: none.
Disclaimer: Don't own these characters. No money is being made out of this work.
Summary: Severus gives Potter The Look. He should have known such refined seduction technique was too subtle for a Gryffindor.

The Look.

Severus would never earn an Outstanding on a seduction test, but he wouldn’t get a Troll, either; so he was understandably miffed when Potter ignored the reasonably attractive I-want-to-kiss-you-stupid look he’d spent a month perfecting, and rambled on about Quidditch.

Potter.” Severus interrupted, determined to draw the idiot’s attention to The Look. Potter didn’t catch on, and Severus realized he wouldn’t bag his colleague unless he abandoned his precious subtlety altogether. Drat.

I’m giving you The Look.”

Potter blinked. “What look?”

The I-want-to-kiss-you-stupid look.


Severus goggled. “Er-”

Never mind. Forget the look, you, git. Go for the kiss instead.”


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Date: 2017-02-01 08:17 pm (UTC)
dracdauter: (Default)
From: [personal profile] dracdauter
Too funny! Thanks for making me giggle.

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Date: 2017-02-01 08:48 pm (UTC)
teryarel: (Default)
From: [personal profile] teryarel
Ha, ha. *smothers laugh* Um. Poor Severus. All those preparations and hard work put into perfecting it - and the Look falls on blind eyes...

Trust a Gryffindor to trample all subtle hints with ignorance and force a well-laid plan to dissipate into nothing! And, even worse, forcing a Syltherin to spell things out and to - gasp! - act like a ... like ... like a Gryffindor!! Shocking.

But: In the end Harry swoops in for the kiss. (Finally.)

Thank you for this nice drabble, my dear friend! I really enjoyed reading it. And I didn't laugh. Not one bit. Not even cracked a smile. No, no. ^^

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Date: 2017-02-01 09:31 pm (UTC)
felaine: (stompy boots)
From: [personal profile] felaine
If I had a "headdesk" icon this would be the place.

Sev practicing THE LOOK in a mirror.
Love Harry's reaction; lucky for them both.

Good work.

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Date: 2017-02-02 12:42 am (UTC)
iulia_linnea: (Default)
From: [personal profile] iulia_linnea
Hee! I agree with Harry; the direct approach is best!

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Date: 2017-02-02 01:44 am (UTC)
alisanne: (Default)
From: [personal profile] alisanne
Eminently practical. That's our Harry. :)
Very cute!

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Date: 2017-02-02 03:53 am (UTC)
adafrog: (Default)
From: [personal profile] adafrog
lol Severus should know better than to try to be subtle.

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Date: 2017-02-02 08:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] adafrog
At least he did finally get what he wanted.

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Date: 2017-02-02 07:24 am (UTC)
lilyseyes: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lilyseyes
Poor Severus! Subtle is just not Harry forte! :)

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Date: 2017-02-02 01:34 pm (UTC)
majmunka: (Default)
From: [personal profile] majmunka
Oh Sev... :D :D :D I shouldn't laugh at you but that's beyond funny :D :D :D

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Date: 2017-02-02 03:31 pm (UTC)
sassy_cat: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sassy_cat
Ha! Poor Severus, making things harder than necessary in the name of subtlety :)

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Date: 2017-02-04 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] keyairreem
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Absolutley what would happen! Harry is that kind of clueless! Thank you for the giggles!

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Date: 2017-02-22 05:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sarahsezlove
But, still...that month was definitely not wasted.
Fabulous, as always.

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