*applauds* Oh God, how I loved your Severus! LOL, Harry was such a bumbling idiot, screwing this whole business royally up, poor dear. He is lucky that he is still alive after such a fiasco. "There's nothing the matter, I promise. I just... I want to... -no. I need to tell you how important you are. To me, that is. You are important to me. I... I... Oh, for fuck's sake! Here. Take the bloody present and... have a happy birthday, Severus.” LMFAO and headdesking at the same time! Ok, so seriously: I liked the way you built the tension here, I sat on the edge of my chair on the whole way down to Severus' rooms, and I got seriously worried when he mentioned the ring on Lily's finger, and the last time he had seen it. I was extremely angry with Harry for dumping all this (specifically all this LIKE this)on Severus, then sweethearting him and going on his merry (and quite cowardly) way. I was extremely proud of Severus, when he made him do it properly. His comeback was priceless! I loved every single word of it! This proposal of yours must have been the very worst in the history of Wizardkind... and a proper kiss! indeed. I'm so glad that Harry was able to remedy the situaton, and come up with a heartmelting, honest and beautiful proposal. My fluff holders are full again, all thanks to him;)
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Date: 2014-01-13 01:27 pm (UTC)"There's nothing the matter, I promise. I just... I want to... -no. I need to tell you how important you are. To me, that is. You are important to me. I... I... Oh, for fuck's sake! Here. Take the bloody present and... have a happy birthday, Severus.” LMFAO and headdesking at the same time!
Ok, so seriously: I liked the way you built the tension here, I sat on the edge of my chair on the whole way down to Severus' rooms, and I got seriously worried when he mentioned the ring on Lily's finger, and the last time he had seen it. I was extremely angry with Harry for dumping all this (specifically all this LIKE this)on Severus, then sweethearting him and going on his merry (and quite cowardly) way. I was extremely proud of Severus, when he made him do it properly. His comeback was priceless! I loved every single word of it!
This proposal of yours must have been the very worst in the history of Wizardkind... and a proper kiss! indeed.
I'm so glad that Harry was able to remedy the situaton, and come up with a heartmelting, honest and beautiful proposal. My fluff holders are full again, all thanks to him;)
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