I can't tell you what a joy it was to find a full length story from my favourite author. Every time I see something new from you, whether it's 100 or 1000 words, I get so excited! Your confidant Harry and fragile Severus is always how I picture this pair in my mind, and as always, you captured this perfectly.
Your story had me captivated from beginning to end, and I found myself wanting to shake the poor Potions master several times to open his eyes to what the whole world could obviously see.
Harry was so brilliant in his patience for Severus. You can feel how badly he wants to act on his feelings, but holds off to make sure his 'treasure' is never uncomfortable. I absolutely loved the various snippets of Harry's jealousy, especially with Severus' shop assistant;)
I look forward with relish to your next story, whatever it may be!
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Date: 2013-02-15 01:11 am (UTC)Your story had me captivated from beginning to end, and I found myself wanting to shake the poor Potions master several times to open his eyes to what the whole world could obviously see.
Harry was so brilliant in his patience for Severus. You can feel how badly he wants to act on his feelings, but holds off to make sure his 'treasure' is never uncomfortable. I absolutely loved the various snippets of Harry's jealousy, especially with Severus' shop assistant;)
I look forward with relish to your next story, whatever it may be!