I'm chuffed that you enjoyed this story so much, barb, and as I mentioned to you in the comment above: I am very aware that my NC-17 scenes aren't all that great. They are hardly detailed, as you very rightly pointed out, and contain 'way too much talk' in my sister's opinion, but I'm glad that you found something to like about this one. :D

Thanks, as usual, for taking the time not only to read another work of mine but also for sharing your thoughts about this story in such detail with me.

Take care for now, my friend.
pekeleke