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Title: Beautiful Reality.
Author: pekeleke
Pairing(s): Severus Snape/Harry Potter
Challenge: Written for snarry_100 ( IJ, LJ, DW ) prompt challenge 562: Open.
Rating: G
Length: 100
Warnings: none.
Disclaimer: Don't own these characters. No money is being made out of this work.
Summary: There is only one thing more beautiful than a beautiful dream, and that’s a beautiful reality.


Beautiful Reality.

Harry’s mouth trembles as Severus’ retreats. Warm, tea-flavored breath fans across his kiss-swollen lips as Harry simply sits there, eyes tightly closed, trying to hold on to the moment.

Look at me.” Severus pleads, but Harry’s eyelids tighten instinctively.

I can’t. I—What if I’m dreaming all this? What if you aren’t really here?”

Severus gasps,I’ve never been anyone’s dream before,” he whispers wonderingly, shattering Harry’s crippling fear. Harry’s eyes flutter open, he stares and sighs, instantly enraptured. He’s never seen anything as gorgeous as Severus’ candid delight.

You’re not my dream anymore,” he says, “You’re my beautiful reality.”

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Date: 2017-02-08 04:44 pm (UTC)
lav123: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lav123
Love it!

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Date: 2017-02-08 04:57 pm (UTC)
agneskamilla: (Default)
From: [personal profile] agneskamilla
Aww... This was delightful. They are so cute (they would probably hex me for saying this but still). I esoecially loved the first two sentences; so expressive, I almost closed my own eyes too. I didn't only because I couldn't have read the rest;)

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Date: 2017-02-08 05:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sarahsezlove
Simply beautiful.

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Date: 2017-02-08 07:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] teryarel
Your words carry so much beauty and warmth, like a cozy blanket that wraps around you to keep you warm and safe, and a mug of hot chocolate around which you can curl your fingers. It is both grounding and uplifting at once.

“I’ve never been anyone’s dream before,” he whispers wonderingly I can hear his voice in my ears. And I can see the expression of surprise and disbelief on his face. I understand why Harry would be enraptured. This is one of those moments when you wish you could pull the image out of your mind to look at it like you would at a picture. (I'm so envious of magical photos and pensieves right now - but, my muggle mind will have to do...)

Thank you for this beatiful dream that is Harry's reality, my dear friend! ^^ I love it.

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Date: 2017-02-08 07:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sassy_cat
Sweet stuff! I love how you bring the scene to life with little details like tea-flavored breath and candid delight. Well done :)

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Date: 2017-02-09 03:19 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] adafrog
Very good, thanks.

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Date: 2017-02-09 04:02 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] dracdauter
Such beautiful words. Made me sigh.

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Date: 2017-02-09 11:40 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] iulia_linnea
This is so romantic and lovely. I enjoyed it very much.

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Date: 2017-02-10 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] keyairreem
So beautiful-you could almost see the heat shimmering between them! Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 2017-02-10 08:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] alisanne
Aww! So romantic and dreamy. :)

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