Beautiful Reality.

[pekeleke]

Title: Beautiful Reality.
Author: pekeleke
Pairing(s): Severus Snape/Harry Potter
Challenge: Written for snarry_100 ( IJ, LJ, DW ) prompt challenge 562: Open.
Rating: G
Length: 100
Warnings: none.
Disclaimer: Don't own these characters. No money is being made out of this work.
Summary: There is only one thing more beautiful than a beautiful dream, and that’s a beautiful reality.
 

Beautiful Reality.

Harry’s mouth trembles as Severus’ retreats. Warm, tea-flavored breath fans across his kiss-swollen lips as Harry simply sits there, eyes tightly closed, trying to hold on to the moment.

“Look at me.” Severus pleads, but Harry’s eyelids tighten instinctively.

“I can’t. I—What if I’m dreaming all this? What if you aren’t really here?”

Severus gasps, “I’ve never been anyone’s dream before,” he whispers wonderingly, shattering Harry’s crippling fear. Harry’s eyes flutter open, he stares and sighs, instantly enraptured. He’s never seen anything as gorgeous as Severus’ candid delight.

“You’re not my dream anymore,” he says, “You’re my beautiful reality.”

Comments

[lav123]

Love it!

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it, lav. Thanks so much for your kind and lovely comment. :D

[agneskamilla]

Aww... This was delightful. They are so cute (they would probably hex me for saying this but still). I esoecially loved the first two sentences; so expressive, I almost closed my own eyes too. I didn't only because I couldn't have read the rest;)

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this drabble so much, agnes. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to both read and review another work of mine. Your kind and lovely comment meant the world to me. <3

[sarahsezlove]

Simply beautiful.

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it,sarahsezlove. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to both read and review another work of mine. Your kind and lovely comment was greatly appreciated. <3

[teryarel]

Your words carry so much beauty and warmth, like a cozy blanket that wraps around you to keep you warm and safe, and a mug of hot chocolate around which you can curl your fingers. It is both grounding and uplifting at once.

“I’ve never been anyone’s dream before,” he whispers wonderingly I can hear his voice in my ears. And I can see the expression of surprise and disbelief on his face. I understand why Harry would be enraptured. This is one of those moments when you wish you could pull the image out of your mind to look at it like you would at a picture. (I'm so envious of magical photos and pensieves right now - but, my muggle mind will have to do...)

Thank you for this beatiful dream that is Harry's reality, my dear friend! ^^ I love it.

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that this drabble not only gave you that warm and fluffy feeling, but that you were also able to picture Severus' reaction to being called 'a dream' so clearly, teryarel. You've made me jealous of magical photos and pensieves, too, for you describe Severus' voice and expression in such beautiful terms that I'd really love to 'see' the picture in your head. <3

Thanks, as always, for taking the time to both read and review another work of mine, my dear friend. Your kind and lovely comment meant the world to me. :D

Hugs
pekeleke

[sassy_cat]

Sweet stuff! I love how you bring the scene to life with little details like tea-flavored breath and candid delight. Well done :)

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you found this drabble so sweet, sassy_cat. Thanks for taking the time to both read and review it. Your kind and lovely comment was greatly appreciated. <3

[adafrog]

Very good, thanks.

[pekeleke]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, ada. Thanks, as always, for your lovely comment.:)

[dracdauter]

Such beautiful words. Made me sigh.

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this drabble so much, dracdauter. Thanks for taking the time to both read and review it. Your kind and lovely comment was greatly appreciated. <3

[iulia_linnea]

This is so romantic and lovely. I enjoyed it very much.

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for your kind and lovely comment. :)

[keyairreem]

So beautiful-you could almost see the heat shimmering between them! Thank you for sharing.

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it so much, keyairreem. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to both read and review another work of mine. Your kind and lovely comment was greatly appreciated. :)

[alisanne]

Aww! So romantic and dreamy. :)
Lovely!

[pekeleke]

I'm thrilled that you found this drabble so romantic, ali. Thanks, as always, for taking the time to both read and review another work of mine. :D